"christmas Tree Lights"

lights mirror your eyes...

             the colors highlight our scene...

                                             the bow around us...








"Haiku me a Christmas tree contest by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Congrad's on your win Mike! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:40 PM
CHEERS to the joyous award for this contest.. great job! nette
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Excellence here..Congratulations on your win.Sara
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:15 PM
"Haiku Me a Christmas TreeCongratulations on your win in Andrea's " contest Michael. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Many congrats Michael for picking up 2nd spot in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Haick Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, Michael! Always, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Congrats my White Knight on your big top win in Andrea's cool contest.. with this super entry and great words of luv.. my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory.. hope we will be able to say the same for those boys in blue after today's game.. your Jersey Girl forever and always and beyond..luv..
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Great!! congrats, michael and thanks for the the wishes.. nette
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Michael
Neels Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 10:35 PM
Mr. R ;-) super congrats on your awesome win in Andrea's contest, love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Congratulations on your big win, Michael!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Michael, I sure hope I interpreted this one right. Because the way I was seeing it, that is why I gave it high marks. I envisioned the couple very intimate with a bow that has gotten around them somehow. So romantic. Congratulations on your second place. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Such a nice haiku, Michael!! The reflection in her eyes. Such a nice way to illustrate this scene!! :)
Harper Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 9:10 PM
Very imaginative and fun, good luck, enjoyed this:)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Would u please go back and read my "Tree To Treasure".. made some changes .. give me honest opinion my W.K. thankxx J.G.. luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Another wonderful entry for Andrea .. so visual in the lines of luv exuding so sweetly Michael.. good luck my friend.. a perfect piece .. your J.G. forever with luv to my W.K....always..
Haick Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 7:42 PM
This will surely be on the Winners' List, Michael...beautiful romantic imagery...Love, audrey
Bark Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 5:02 PM
if you want to read a good one of mine micheal, read my contest entry "loving life" its one of my favorites that i have written WITH LOVE FOREVER AND ALWAYS Lizzy.b <3
K. Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 4:32 PM
What a very lovely & sweet image comes to mind, Michael-- really enjoyed reading your haiku :) -- nikko :)
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Oh Micheal such words of love.Beautiful really enjoyed it.Thanks for the great comment on my read.Teresa/Theoklapoet
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:07 PM
You have painted a nice bow of happiness around you , Michael
Johnson Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Very lovely Michael. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
Hales Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:24 AM
perfect !!!! and yes you sure did !!!! get it right x sarah your friend x
Bark Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:23 AM
your so sweet micheal...your always one i look for on my comment page =) with love always and forever Lizzy.b <3
Bark Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:13 AM
thank you for the very sweet comment..i really do try my best to please other people on this website...it gives me hope sometimes...even though im so young, i still try to be more mature than my age... with lov always, Lizzy.b <3
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