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Christmas Tree

The Birch tree said, I want to be a Christmas tree The Balsam Fir tree said, you can’t be, you’re a Birch The Birch tree said, I am white as snow, yes I can The Maple tree said, find a purpose, I make syrup The Oak tree said in agreement, I feed the squirrels Then, the squirrels nearby could hear the chatter Feeling bad for the Birch tree, they decided to gather They collected acorns and strung them with blades of grass They hung them around the Birch tree as perfect garland Then the Blue Jay gathered some Holly Berries too The Eagle put together some special leaves for a star Soon, the Birch was a Christmas tree, gleaming from afar! Heidi Sands 12/8/18 Placed 4th in the premiere Christmas tree poetry contest.

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Date: 1/5/2019 2:04:00 PM
Hello Heidi, I am so pleased that the birth tree became the Christmas Tree. Why not? We take a bare bush and decorated with Christmas lights. It is beautiful. We do this every year. Have a nice day my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene. And it sounds nice, what you do as well! Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/3/2019 4:33:00 PM
Congrats Heidi..your poem is climbing the best poem chart.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2019 4:50:00 PM
Oh, thank you for letting me know. I appreciate your comment Vijay! :) I hope your evening is going well !
Date: 12/21/2018 9:52:00 PM
Oh, this is absolutely wonderful, Heidi. A new fave for me. I adore the way the creatures came together to make the birch tree's wish of becoming a Christmas tree come true! Congratulations on your win, Carolyn
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Carolyn. I am happy to read this today and see that you enjoyed it and consider it a favorite. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a great day :)
Date: 12/21/2018 5:43:00 PM
Such a sweet story of the birch tree becoming a Christmas tree. So many messages in your verse. We all can strive to be more. Good one, Heidi. Congrats!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you Sandy ! :)
Date: 12/21/2018 2:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem Heidi, congrats on your win and sending kindest Christmassy thoughts Ann xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Ann! I hope you have a nice Christmas, filled with happiness and peace :)
Date: 12/20/2018 7:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/20/2018 2:10:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I appreciate that ! :)
Date: 12/20/2018 8:13:00 AM
I LOVE where you took the prompt, Heidi. CONGRATS! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice :)
Date: 12/20/2018 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Heidi! I love the idea of the friends all pitching in and making the tree's dream come true :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 12/9/2018 8:28:00 AM
I love this poem, great imagery, good luck in the contest!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Tania :)
Date: 12/8/2018 5:48:00 PM
What wonderful imagery Heidi, ilikeyour take on the fir tree theme, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan! I hope you have a happy season :)
Date: 12/8/2018 4:51:00 PM
They made it into a beautiful Christmas tree..Wonderful write Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! :)

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