Christmas Time

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 8:33 AM
A touching though sad write Beautifuly drawn with a light pencil.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 3:05 AM
really warm deep very beautifully penned piece dear pal bless you
Ellison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:36 PM
You have such a warm loving way of expressing your heart!!! You are a sweetheart my dear Charmaine! The scene you portray is so vivid and warm and you make us feel a part of it! I love you and your amazing poetry my sweet Charmaine! Huge hugs XXX
Baez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:57 PM
I think I need a cup of hot chocolate and to sit next to a fire after reading your lovely poem. I can hear the crackling of the wood as I speak, well more like as I write. :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Ah so beautiful Charmaine. I am so looking forward to this blissful season. You have portrayed it beautifully .
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 7:59 AM
I love the setting but wish it was a happier tune under the mistletoe....love melting icicles in his eyes....hugs Tim
Meade Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 7:48 AM
All five senses were tuned in -- enjoying your tapestry of words, imagines, smells, and colors -- the heart felt the sting of a love gone . . . well done.
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