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Christmas Surprises

One winter long long ago It was our first year together My husband God bless his heart Decided he’d go shopping You guessed it T’was Christmas eve We’ll say up front The man’s on crutches And despises shopping To the nth degree But off he went Into a small pharmacy Loaded up his cart Imagine my surprise On Christmas morn When I was handed a Jumbo Christmas stocking Everything individually wrapped Aspirin, tums, soap Throat lozenges A battery-operated toothbrush And so much more But what I remember most vividly Was my twelve year supply Of pink Lady Schick razors That hint of disappointment Didn’t last too long For now this wife Is best buds with Santa Claus No matter what else May hide under the Christmas tree Every year since There have always been Delightfully wrapped surprises Greeted Christmas day With the loudest and cheeriest “ Thank you ~ Thank you, Santa. ” And that's how Christmas Was saved over in our household The moral of the story being We should never count on others To make us happy When we are pleasantly surprised That's just bonus I love winter and Everything about Christmas Always have Always will It's never been About presents But more about The holiday cheer And the love that bonds us To our loved ones AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on December 1, 2021 for contest A CHRISTMAS GIFT MEMORY sponsored by B.J. LEGROS KELLEY - RANKED 3RD and on December 6, 2017 for contest CHRISTMAS STORY sponsored by EVE ROPER - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 12/28/2021 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Good memories are the best kind. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. Very best wishes to you ~
Date: 12/27/2021 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy placement in the poetry contest and thank you for submitting this poetic memory! This was so adorable...! Sometimes we may miss the mark on knowing what our loved one really might like, especially early on, but he obviously loved you so much to fill a giant stocking with things he individually wrapped! So cute! It is heartwarming to know too that every year since he has been a wonderful Santa! May God bless you and your husband with much joy in the new year ahead!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you very much, BJ. Thanks for hosting and for the recognition for my poem. Most appreciated. Happy New Year and best wishes to you and yours.
Date: 12/24/2021 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated ~
Date: 12/23/2017 8:44:00 AM
Definitely worth another read. Merry Christmas!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/23/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Very best wishes to you and your loved ones. Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/22/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for entering the contest , Line, husbands are not very good at what their wives really want :) congratulations on your win ! Merry Christmas and Hugs Eve ~`*
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. I'm lucky he is romantic at heart. That was just a glitch I am managing quite well to get around ;-)
Date: 12/22/2017 6:41:00 AM
Line, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your winning entry. Congratulations, and Merry Christmas!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Curtis. I very much appreciated your visit.
Date: 12/21/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations. Great write!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/21/2017 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Rhoda. Very appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2017 8:49:00 AM
This is a lot of fun.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/10/2017 8:09:00 PM
A lasting memory, for sure.
Date: 12/7/2017 8:27:00 AM
This is adorable, Line, Love is the best gift and you have that xxxooo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/7/2017 11:34:00 PM
How true, Mike. I am blessed that way with daily doses.
Date: 12/7/2017 6:54:00 AM
A sweet loving tribute and a recall of happy memories.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/7/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Vijay.
Date: 12/6/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Line, this poem just inspired me what to get my girl friend, yes...winner,, great write, cheers
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/6/2017 10:03:00 PM
A lifetime supply of razor blades - she'll be so happy!

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