Christmas Surprises

One winter long long ago
It was our first year together
My husband
God bless his heart
Decided he’d go shopping
You guessed it
'Twas Christmas eve.

We’ll say up front
The man’s on crutches
And despises shopping
To the nth degree
But off he went
Into a small pharmacy
Loaded up his cart

Imagine my surprise
On Christmas morn
When I was handed a
Jumbo Christmas stocking
Everything individually wrapped

Aspirin, tums, soap
Throat lozenges
A battery-operated toothbrush
And so much more
But what I remember most vividly
Was my twelve year supply
Of pink Lady Schick razors

That hint of disappointment
Didn’t last too long
For now this wife
Is best buds with Santa Claus
No matter what else
May hide under the Christmas tree
Every year since
There have always been
Delightfully wrapped surprises
Greeted Christmas day
With the loudest and cheeriest
“ Thank you,
Thank you, Santa. ”

And that's how Christmas
Was saved over in our household
The moral of the story being
We should never count on others
To make us happy
When we are pleasantly surprised
That's just bonus

I love winter and
Everything about Christmas
Always have
Always will
It's never been
About presents
But more about
The holiday cheer
And the love that bonds us
To our loved ones



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on December 1, 2021 for contest A CHRISTMAS GIFT MEMORY sponsored by B.J. LEGROS KELLEY  -  RANKED 3RD

and on December 6, 2017 for contest CHRISTMAS STORY sponsored by EVE ROPER -  RANKED 4TH
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Good memories are the best kind. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. Very best wishes to you ~
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 12:51 AM
Congratulations on your trophy placement in the poetry contest and thank you for submitting this poetic memory! This was so adorable...! Sometimes we may miss the mark on knowing what our loved one really might like, especially early on, but he obviously loved you so much to fill a giant stocking with things he individually wrapped! So cute! It is heartwarming to know too that every year since he has been a wonderful Santa! May God bless you and your husband with much joy in the new year ahead!
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Thank you very much, BJ. Thanks for hosting and for the recognition for my poem. Most appreciated. Happy New Year and best wishes to you and yours.
Koplin Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated ~
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Definitely worth another read. Merry Christmas!
Gauthier Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Thanks, Richard. Very best wishes to you and your loved ones. Merry Christmas!
Roper Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thank you for entering the contest , Line, husbands are not very good at what their wives really want :) congratulations on your win ! Merry Christmas and Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:29 PM
Thanks, Eve. I'm lucky he is romantic at heart. That was just a glitch I am managing quite well to get around ;-)
Moorman Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Line, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your winning entry. Congratulations, and Merry Christmas!
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Thank you so much, Curtis. I very much appreciated your visit.
Tripp Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations. Great write!
Gauthier Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 10:41 PM
Thanks, Rhoda. Very appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:49 AM
This is a lot of fun.
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 8:09 PM
A lasting memory, for sure.
Gentile Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 8:27 AM
This is adorable, Line, Love is the best gift and you have that xxxooo
Gauthier Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 11:34 PM
How true, Mike. I am blessed that way with daily doses.
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 6:54 AM
A sweet loving tribute and a recall of happy memories.
Gauthier Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Thanks for your visit, Vijay.
Raynes Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thanks Line, this poem just inspired me what to get my girl friend, yes...winner,, great write, cheers
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 10:03 PM
A lifetime supply of razor blades - she'll be so happy!
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