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Christmas Past

In midst of forest stands an ancient tree decorated by nature with white cotton snow puffs, icicles glisten and gleam sparkling in the sunlight. Around its base are gathered all the forest's creatures with pregnant pause they wait as the star shines out a beacon to all calling out, hush now do you hear? The sleigh bells ringing out as down swoops Santa wait, he is not alone with him the blessed babe in distance approach the three wise men bears gifts. All the creatures now on bended knees him they salute the ancient tree smiles knowingly and the heavens celebrate with comet tails and shooting stars the precious babe. written 12/02/2014 contest Hush of Christmas Past

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Date: 12/4/2014 8:13:00 PM
beautifully crafted as always linda dear friend
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Date: 12/3/2014 6:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this story of a tree, loved it alot thanks for sharing this wonderful story with me tonight, thank you for your cool comments also, I've come to really enjoy reading your works my friend you make a nice contribution to our poetry soup, cheri
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:54:00 AM
soulful rendition of Christmas past, shadow... splendid tale for the season..huggs
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:54:00 AM
ty Nette very kind of you hugs
Date: 12/2/2014 11:07:00 AM
Forgot to rate this.
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:54:00 AM
ty Brenda I appreciate your support hugs
Date: 12/2/2014 11:06:00 AM
A very beautiful imaginative poem Shadow. I feel a certain peace as I read and really like this. 7+
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Date: 12/2/2014 11:04:00 AM
simply charming Shadow:-)Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:53:00 AM
ty Jan hugs

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