Christmas Past

In midst of forest stands an ancient tree
decorated by nature with white cotton snow puffs,
icicles glisten and gleam sparkling in the sunlight.

Around its base are gathered all the forest's creatures
with pregnant pause they wait as the star shines out
a beacon to all calling out, hush now do you hear?

The sleigh bells ringing out as down swoops Santa
wait, he is not alone with him the blessed babe 
in distance approach the three wise men bears gifts.

All the creatures now on bended knees him they salute
the ancient tree smiles knowingly and the heavens
celebrate with comet tails and shooting stars the precious babe.

written 12/02/2014

contest Hush of Christmas Past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:13 PM
beautifully crafted as always linda dear friend
Dunn Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Enjoyed reading this story of a tree, loved it alot thanks for sharing this wonderful story with me tonight, thank you for your cool comments also, I've come to really enjoy reading your works my friend you make a nice contribution to our poetry soup, cheri
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:54 AM
soulful rendition of Christmas past, shadow... splendid tale for the season..huggs
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 11:54 AM
ty Nette very kind of you hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Forgot to rate this.
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 11:54 AM
ty Brenda I appreciate your support hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:06 AM
A very beautiful imaginative poem Shadow. I feel a certain peace as I read and really like this. 7+
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:04 AM
simply charming Shadow:-)Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 11:53 AM
ty Jan hugs
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