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Christmas Night

‘Twas an auspicious solemn holy night Under the guiding star of Bethlehem This baby Jesus born in a manger Led by choir divine of angels singing Under the guiding star of Bethlehem From far they came to praise the birth of Christ Led by choir divine of angels singing He’d walk the talk of true brotherly love From far they came to praise the birth of Christ This baby Jesus born in a manger He’d walk the talk of true brotherly love ‘Twas an auspicious solemn holy night Submitted on January 18, 2020 for contest CHRISTMAS PANTOUM RHYME (photo #1) sponsored by EVE ROPER - RANKED 1ST

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2020 12:58:00 AM

This form It’s such a challenge for me I have never written one. You did a really beautiful job on this Line. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/26/2020 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie. You must try to write one...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/25/2020 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Line. I want to thank you for entering my contest. The birthday of Jesus is my favorite time to remind me of why I am blessed. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme, and imagery. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/25/2020 10:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated. Your contest was fun.