Line Gauthier Poet Pantoum

Christmas Night

‘Twas an auspicious solemn holy night 
Under the guiding star of Bethlehem
This baby Jesus born in a manger
Led by choir divine of angels singing

Under the guiding star of Bethlehem
From far they came to praise the birth of Christ
Led by choir divine of angels singing
He’d walk the talk of true brotherly love

From far they came to praise the birth of Christ
This baby Jesus born in a manger
He’d walk the talk of true brotherly love
‘Twas an auspicious solemn holy night



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on January 18, 2020 for contest CHRISTMAS PANTOUM RHYME (photo #1) sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 1ST

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Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2020 at 12:58 AM This form It’s such a challenge for me I have never written one. You did a really beautiful job on this Line. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! xxoo Line Gauthier January 26, 2020 at 8:21 AM Thank you so much, Connie. You must try to write one...

Eve Roper January 25, 2020 at 8:14 PM Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Line. I want to thank you for entering my contest. The birthday of Jesus is my favorite time to remind me of why I am blessed. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme, and imagery. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier January 25, 2020 at 10:53 PM Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated. Your contest was fun.

Caren Krutsinger January 19, 2020 at 4:44 PM Gorgeous Christmas pantoum, my friend. Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:11 PM Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.

Harry Horsman January 19, 2020 at 3:21 AM I love this too, Line..Happy New Year. Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:11 PM Thanks, Harry. Much appreciated.

M. L. Kiser January 18, 2020 at 6:49 PM A beautiful pantoum! Line Gauthier January 19, 2020 at 9:11 PM Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.