Christmas Mourning

Some Christmas celebrants’ wide smiles
and joy displayed around their trees
and at huge feasts that some drive miles
to share imply they’re trouble free.

In early morning hours, tears
will flow for those who won’t be there
to open presents, echo “Cheers,”
and share the day with those who care.

This flood of grief must cease before
the kids wake up and want to see
what Santa brought. When they are more
mature, they’ll learn how life can be.

They’ll realize that grief hits hard
this time of year, that loss and past
mistakes can haunt and leave them scarred,
for childhood innocence can’t last.


Date: November 20, 2018
Title: CHRISTMAS MOURNING      Placed 5th (of ten)
Sponsor: P. S. AWTRY

Date: December 12, 2019
Contest Title: Writing Challenge--December 2019--I Want Christmas Poems
Sponsor: Dear Heart--Wiishkobi Ode
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Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Good one, Janice. Everyone has such different experiences during this time. We just never know how sad it can be for some. Congrats on the win
Canerdy Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Janice
La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Janice congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
Canerdy Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 12:40 PM
THANKS, Constance.
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 1:20 AM
Very well said. Somehow we never forget the ones who brought so much to our holiday celebrations - smiles and tears seem to live together. Congratulations on your placement.
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 7:31 AM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:33 PM
So true, Janice! I’m starting to understand what the “older people” went through when I was a naive child. Life catches up. Mourning a couple of the good ones.
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Yes, Christmas can be so bittersweet, Janice, at holidays, and especially Christmas, when family members can no longer take part. Congrats on your win for your well-written and touching poem. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra! Janice
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:58 PM
It's a very difficult time for many Janice, many congrats on your win with this touching poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Janice
Gentile Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations to you as well Janice, if only the innocence of youth could last!! A lovely and moving poem xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Watson Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Very true, Janice and such a well composed poem.
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thanks so much, Wendy! Janice
Awtry Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Janice, this is such a wise and elegant take on this topic. Thank you for participating in this contest. Congratulations.
Canerdy Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Thank you SO MUCH for placing my poem! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 3:47 PM
I love your spin on this theme, Janice. Well penned. Congrats on your top win.
Canerdy Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
La France Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Janice, you touched on the truth for many at Christmas, there is no other time of the year that grief is more felt, and one must put on that mask of smiles and joy for the family, but beneath the cheers are tears, well done ~
Canerdy Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Dear Heart, THANK YOU so much for this comment! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 8:01 AM
It is a very emotional time of the year and we never fail to look back and think.of those no longer with us. Lovely verse Janice. Good luck. Tom.
Canerdy Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 11:18 AM
THANK YOU so much, Tom! Janice
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