Christmas Mourning

CHRISTMAS MOURNING O mourning beast of Christmas steals three days. The wife bakes joy with kids beside her skirt. A man, mails cards just down the street, agaze. The oven shield ablaze... the pavement’s curt. A pulse of love delivers kiss and hugs of cookie crumbs...the children whirl with dance. Mom pours the chill eggnog...they cheer with mugs. Before the nightmare ring, they’re in a trance. The kettle blasts like vulturine alarm. The buzz in ears a fright that makes one jump. Reality that knocks to gift its harm. Awake her tears which cause shoulders to slump. O Christmas mourning song - it is bereft. A manger lost to swollen eyes - a theft. Date:11/18/2018 Contest: CHRISTMAS MOURNING Sponsor: PS Awtry A kettle is a term that birders use to describe a group of birds wheeling and circling in the air. (Wikipedia reference)
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Haight Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim. A very unique and powerful presentation that addressed the theme so well. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, sweet Sandra!
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 3:35 PM
what a unique take on the mourning theme Kim, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hugs...Kim
Moorman Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, Curtis!
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 12:02 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Awtry Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Kim what a lovely sad write. Congratulations on placing in this contest :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, P.S.!
Warrior Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Well crafted Kimmy...I'm in mourning...sad tale...love & light...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 10:25 AM
So sorry, my dear friend! <3 Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 5:01 AM
Kim, you are the sonnet-maestro, and this missive is the proof of that. Very nicely done, as usual. You always bring something interesting to the table with your poetesses' heart.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thank you so much, sweet friend! <3 Kim
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 2:49 AM
What a beauty dear Kim! What an opulent imagery! Words dripping with bittersweet memories! A masterful and wonderful rendition of our life where sorrow and happiness are intertwined! A great Sonnet! A FAV. The best of luck in the contest and Merry Christmas!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Thank you, Besma! Always faithful with a lovely comment! <3 Kim Story loosely based on my grandfather’s death.
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