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Christmas Mourning

CHRISTMAS MOURNING O mourning beast of Christmas steals three days. The wife bakes joy with kids beside her skirt. A man, mails cards just down the street, agaze. The oven shield ablaze... the pavement’s curt. A pulse of love delivers kiss and hugs of cookie crumbs...the children whirl with dance. Mom pours the chill eggnog...they cheer with mugs. Before the nightmare ring, they’re in a trance. The kettle blasts like vulturine alarm. The buzz in ears a fright that makes one jump. Reality that knocks to gift its harm. Awake her tears which cause shoulders to slump. O Christmas mourning song - it is bereft. A manger lost to swollen eyes - a theft. Date:11/18/2018 Contest: CHRISTMAS MOURNING Sponsor: PS Awtry A kettle is a term that birders use to describe a group of birds wheeling and circling in the air. (Wikipedia reference)

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Date: 12/4/2018 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim. A very unique and powerful presentation that addressed the theme so well. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Sandra!
Date: 12/4/2018 3:35:00 PM
what a unique take on the mourning theme Kim, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hugs...Kim
Date: 12/4/2018 2:06:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you, Curtis!
Date: 12/4/2018 12:02:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 12/3/2018 11:45:00 PM
Kim what a lovely sad write. Congratulations on placing in this contest :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you, P.S.!
Date: 11/19/2018 10:16:00 AM
Well crafted Kimmy...I'm in mourning...sad tale...love & light...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 10:25:00 AM
So sorry, my dear friend! <3 Kim
Date: 11/19/2018 5:01:00 AM
Kim, you are the sonnet-maestro, and this missive is the proof of that. Very nicely done, as usual. You always bring something interesting to the table with your poetesses' heart.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet friend! <3 Kim
Date: 11/19/2018 2:49:00 AM
What a beauty dear Kim! What an opulent imagery! Words dripping with bittersweet memories! A masterful and wonderful rendition of our life where sorrow and happiness are intertwined! A great Sonnet! A FAV. The best of luck in the contest and Merry Christmas!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Besma! Always faithful with a lovely comment! <3 Kim Story loosely based on my grandfather’s death.

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