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I will turn, turn back time and the pages of my life, and go back, go back to when I was a child at Christmas; full of happiness and joyful glee before the sorrow, before the Christmas mourning. I loved Christmas day, the cooking and decorating, mom fussing and grandma dusting, dad twining lights; the fireplace crackling and snow falling outside. before the Christmas mourning. I recall the year that I wanted a life size doll. but got a baby doll and I was sad but held my tears; until I went to my room, but in time I loved baby doll, before the Christmas mourning. Another year I got snowball cat all white and cuddly, she ran up the blinking tree and stayed there all day; and we would go to grandpa's farm for a sleigh ride, before the Christmas mourning. Oh, I loved the food and family coming and going, the laughter and singing and dancing around; the decorations and helping mom with the food, before the Christmas mourning. I still have mom's and grandma's decorations, in a tattered box and I will decorate my own tree; then, will visit all the engraved names in the snow, on Christmas morning. ___________________________ November 18, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Christmas Mourning Copyright Protected, ID 18-1086-070-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Christmas Mourning sponsor, PS AWTRY Sixth Place

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Date: 12/5/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Kim , Sandra, and Jan for visiting with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate so much ~.~
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Date: 12/4/2018 9:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance! How hard to have “engraved names in the snow”
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:50:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 7:40:00 PM
Yes, so many memories we all have from our past Christmases, Constance. However, you have really imaged those deep, sentimental, feelings of loss so well in your poem. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:50:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 3:00:00 PM
a poem that so many of us can relate to Constance, so beautifully penned, you write these emotional poems so well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:50:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Wendy, Curtis, Janis, PS, and Eve for visiting my poem with comments and congratulations ~
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:09:00 AM
Dear Heart - This is a difficult and poignant winners list to read through this morning but like yours, all have been very moving and well composed.
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:11:00 PM
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Date: 12/4/2018 1:47:00 AM
My Dear Constance, how sad, but how beautifully penned. You are a true inspiration to the members of Soup due to your heartfelt renderings. I so appreciate your poetry and cherish our friendship. Congratulations on your excellent win in this contest.
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:12:00 PM
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Date: 12/3/2018 11:55:00 PM
I'm back to congratulate you! Janice
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:12:00 PM
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Date: 12/3/2018 11:39:00 PM
Dear Heart, congratulations on this lovely poem and on your win in the contest!
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:13:00 PM
PS thank you for the contest and for my placement, appreciate ~
Date: 12/3/2018 11:32:00 PM
Marvelous write , Dear Heart, I enjoyed reading your beautiful and warm memories the way you wrote this story, and expressed your emotion. . Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:13:00 PM
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Date: 11/24/2018 10:10:00 AM
CayCay, thank you for visiting my poem and for the great comment, so appreciated, it was an emotional write because it was a happy memory and a sad reminder of all I have lost ~
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Date: 11/23/2018 10:59:00 PM
This is dramatic in delivery, the repeated lines bring the emotional punch full on. I enjoyed the entire write, delightful imagery and memories of white wrapped up in a sum up of dark's line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:51:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Phillip for visiting my poem and for the great comment, appreciate a lot ~
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Date: 11/23/2018 12:22:00 AM
So beautifully sad, just a lovely touching write. If we could only go back...but I love how you plan to bring a piece of the memory with you into the future. Superb.
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:52:00 AM
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Date: 11/21/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Nette, Carolyn, and Chris for visiting my poem and for those great comments, appreciate so much, yes it was emotional to write but beautiful too ~
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Date: 11/21/2018 8:25:00 AM
I can not even put into words how this poem touched me this morning. Your words breathe in warm memories and flowing thoughts of the past and the present. Here's to seeing this wonderful piece place at the top of the contest roster. Really wonderfully done.
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:52:00 AM
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Date: 11/21/2018 5:34:00 AM
Christmas is always a time that reminds me how much I miss family and friends who have passed. We have so many treasured memories of merry Christmases, but they can never be repeated. Still, we keep them in our hearts You have written a beautiful entry, Constance, and one to which many readers will relate. Best wishes in the contest, dear! (Made it to my sister's. Sooo warm here.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:38:00 PM
constance, how splendidly pensive; so intimate... enjoyed the repetitive lines for impact... will catch up with you soon...huggs
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:26:00 PM
Janice, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/20/2018 11:22:00 AM
This moving, beautiful poem so well captures the mixed emotions Christmas awakens! Janice
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Kishan and Connie for visiting my poem with those wonderful comments, yes Connie it was an emotional poem to write, there are so many wonderful memories tucked away in my mind, and my Christmas wish is to place in the contest too ~
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Date: 11/19/2018 5:53:00 PM
Nice one
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:54:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:10:00 PM
You had me in tears by the time I got to your ending Constance. Memories return that past joy until we make our own new memories Christmas Morning. Beautiful! I hope this is a top winner! xxoo : )
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:54:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2018 2:28:00 PM
Thanks Warren and Winged for visiting my poem and commenting, so appreciated ~
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:34:00 AM
Excellent portrayal of Christmas mourning Constance...ready for a win my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:55:00 AM
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