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Christmas Mourning

Called up by the Lord I should be happy He suffers no more But I miss him so Nothing is the same Or will ever be In my livingroom I put up a tree while We were still hopeful It was the day after Remembrance Day I keep it lit day and night Wanting nothing more than To stay alone with my sorrow Me and my Christmas mourning This tree by my side AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 17, 2018 for contest CHRISTMAS MOURNING sponsored by P.S. AWTRY

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Date: 11/23/2018 11:05:00 PM
You words put a weighty sad in my chest - means they were effective, yes? You touched me. It would be best if I next clicked on something funny. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 11/23/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, CayCay. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2018 2:44:00 PM
So sad, Line! We lean on the good things even as they still hurt.
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Date: 11/18/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:13:00 PM
Hard moment to stay cheerful; still you've made lemonade from lemons. Wonderfully penned.
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Date: 11/17/2018 11:49:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:07:00 PM
You have risen and surpassed what would have been expected in this heartfelt missive, my friend. As always.
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Date: 11/17/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:04:00 PM
Poignant penning Line <3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:49:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.

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