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Christmas Me Dear Mandurah

Mandurah, cruises, jingle bells, The lake house splendor in shooting stars dwell, Tremendous Christmas without snow, implicitly the stunner glide, Black phantom unveil the cloak of his clandestine pride, Scintillation gigantic Casuarina Equisetifolia ornament tree, Embellish the solitude's dew which endorsed by the clasp of glee, Dear Christmas Eve, I am your bride, Let me merry you by the simplicity of thee pride Author's Note: Mandurah : Situated on Western Australia's beautiful coastline about 72km south of Perth *************************************************************** 5th place SEASON OF LIGHTS, DELIGHTS & ENLIGHTENMENT: OUR GLOBAL COMMUNITY Free Poetry Contest Sponsor : Cyndi MacMillan

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Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 12:09:00 PM

Yanny, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2013 4:24:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 4:58:00 PM

Hi Yanny, a nice SEASON OF LIGHTS a nice & warm CONGRATULATIONS, with your win is a DELIGHT & ENLIGHTENMENT in OUR GLOBAL COMMUNITY (contest)... keep up the good work... always~PD

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/8/2013 6:01:00 PM

Sure Linda, thanks for the sweet encouragement, can't wait to see more of your masterpiece :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2013 10:52:00 AM

Hey Yanny congratulations on excellent win! Hugs Rick.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/4/2013 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Rick :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 10:24:00 AM

I just love that line: Christmas Eve, I am your bride. How fresh that is!! I love this new take on Christmas. Congrats for your win.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/4/2013 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :D

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/1/2012 7:44:00 AM

So many new things here to learn about! [change your form label to Free Verse] what are all these wondrous things?Casuarina Equisetifolia ? I have so enjoyed your comments please do try my new contest for 6 lines on LIGHT..Light & Love

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/1/2012 10:18:00 AM

Debbie, I'm wondering, is this not a kyrielle? I am following the format from the contest, how the real kyrielle format is?

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/1/2012 10:14:00 AM

Casuarina equisetifolia is the type of fir tree with needle-shape leaves, people usually use it for the Christmas tree :D, Thank you for your suggestion Debbie, i will change it into free verse :D, sure i will join your contest, it is worth to try :D

David Williams

Date: 11/25/2012 1:03:00 PM

yanny wow, I love this and Australia.....David

Len Gasun

Date: 11/25/2012 8:24:00 AM

A great poem, Yanny! It gives a very beautiful image of the place. A winning piece for me! Good luck always my dear friend. love/hugs, Leonora

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/25/2012 8:44:00 AM

Dear Leonara, lovely comment from you :D, yours are always uplifting, glad that you like it :D

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/24/2012 8:19:00 PM

nice write Yanny,best of luck

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/25/2012 8:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Richard, it's a pleasure to me to see you here :D

Kerry Singleton

Date: 11/24/2012 7:30:00 PM

Hi Yanny, beautiful little write here :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/25/2012 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Kerry for your lovely visit to my page :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/24/2012 3:28:00 PM

Hi Yanny, love your poem, and yes been there many many times....

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/24/2012 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Harry, I've been there for once and really fell into the view, they are gorgeous with the glittery Christmas decoration lamps, I am really looking forward for my second visit someday on the Christmas Eve :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/24/2012 9:27:00 AM

Lovely words surround the screen in this beauty...hugs Michael

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/24/2012 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Michael, missed you a lot :D, thank you for your time to stop by in my new poem, wishing you a joyful and wonderful day :D -Hug, Yanny