Christmas In the Forest

Near the creek behind the hill
In the forest's winter still

Under trees of ice and snow
Down beneath the bushes low

Goes someone like stomp, stomp, stomp
Makes a noise like chomp, chomp, chomp

It is Santa coming there
Look it's Christmas everywhere
Look it's Christmas everywhere

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Near the creek behind the hill
In the forest's winter still

Under trees of ice and snow
Down beneath the bushes low

Goes someone like tack, tack, tack
Makes a noise like crack, crack, crack

It's a chipmunk coming there
Look it's Christmas everywhere
Look it's Christmas everywhere

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Near the creek behind the hill
In the forest's winter still

Under trees of ice and snow
Down beneath the bushes low

Goes someone like peep, peep, peep
Makes a noise like cheep, cheep, cheep

It's a songbird coming there
Look it's Christmas everywhere
Look it's Christmas everywhere

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There's a lot of repetition here, that's because I made it
actually for a childrens song in the style of a nursery rhyme:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJVhybmI8Zc
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:36 AM
Whimsically fun, and the way you made the sounds is amazingly accurate. It is so much fun to read!
Fleming Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 5:25 AM
It is very nice, Luta...Most soothing! My warmest wishes...And best regards - Have a wonderful New Year! :) john
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