Sand Blown Poet Haiku

Christmas Hiccups

i'mmm dreamminng of aaa....
whiiite chrissstmasss...the most psycho...
logical timmme of...

the yearrr...whennn peopllle....
lisssten...to their doctors wisss...
dom...with evvveryyy...

preeessscription that theyyy...
clearrr...ohhh i'm dreammming of aaa...
whiiite christmasss...though theres...

no snow anywherrre...
or timmme of the yearrr...thessse arrre...
the tropicccsss...andt weee...

use all the top tricksss...
so people will buy more thannn...
beeer...oh i'm dreaming...


stan sand

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Gershon Wolf December 23, 2018 at 5:12 PM Hilarious! ~ Biiinnnnb Ccccccrosssbbby. Sand Blown December 23, 2018 at 6:41 PM thanks for the comment...'merry christmas' time is a peculiar northern phenomenon

Robert L. Hinshaw December 21, 2018 at 5:28 PM I love the wit creativity in this write, Sandy! My kind of poetry. Thanks for your kind comment re the Tempus Fugit thing and best to you and your family during this Christmas Season and for the year to come - Bob Sand Blown December 21, 2018 at 6:01 PM thanks bob...we are as fish in time-water...a fine conundrum

Kim Rodrigues December 21, 2018 at 4:56 PM Yo crazy! Hiccups indeed! :) Sand Blown December 21, 2018 at 5:58 PM I try to be laid back...my first preference is not beer : )

CayCay Godwin December 20, 2018 at 8:21 PM A multiple chuckle from me! CayCay Sand Blown December 21, 2018 at 5:56 PM just got my prescription renewed : )

Constance La France December 20, 2018 at 7:26 PM Sand, enjoyed your fun poem, great ~ Sand Blown December 21, 2018 at 5:55 PM thanks dear heart

Jack Ellison December 20, 2018 at 3:12 PM Almost crapped my pants... yaahoo! We speak the same language!!! Sand Blown December 20, 2018 at 3:19 PM thanks jack...lol

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2018 at 1:33 PM yikes, so funny... enjoyed this, sand; very unque...huggs Sand Blown December 20, 2018 at 2:49 PM thanks nette...it was inspired by a discussion of the real song on late night radio...people wondering if its cofhmmph christmas appropriate for the tropics : )

Kaveesha Ruwindi December 20, 2018 at 10:13 AM This is hilarious. I was rather alarmed at first, then only in occurred to me. lol! :) Sand Blown December 20, 2018 at 12:17 PM humor was the object...and you're right...it's all in how one tells a joke

Caren Krutsinger December 20, 2018 at 7:02 AM Hilarious! I found myself humming it, thinking of all the Christmas songs whose parts I know, and how I drag out my "da da da da's" when I have forgotten. Sand Blown December 20, 2018 at 8:00 AM christmas in other cultures is definitely not the same as here...and probably not as tiring either (no matter all the church go'in : )