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Christmas Eve Tree

Christmas Eve Tree I went out the back door into the yard. Among the drifts that were getting hard. The sun just down and it was late. As I walked out the gate. I Followed the creek still flowing free. And came to just the right tree. I Cut at the tree down low. Till it toppled on the snow. Beside the log fire in this room. I swept the corner with the broom. Brought in the tree using some might. Stood it straight in the firelight. From the attic, put there last year, I fetched the boxes and sat them near. Within are decorations of different types. Angels, stars and snowmen with pipes. There are lights and globes and tinsel by yards. And near the corner are some old Christmas cards. Pictures of skating girls and boys. And children playing with toys. The tree is trimmed for tonight. The wood fire is burning bright. It’s heat, for the cold night it will be. It’s light, reflecting off the tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
John, many Christaimas contest going on... Perhaps you would like to check them out and enter your amazing write... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:58:00 AM
nice write
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Date: 11/24/2013 2:15:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, John ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2013 1:46:00 PM
Hi John, this is a very nice and deep holiday poem... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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