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CHRISTMAS EVE GIFT MANTIS

CHRISTMAS EVE GIFT MANTIS


In one hundred years
I saw a thousand mantises
on this Christmas Eve another
descended unexpected gift
for a northern Lightwave
whilst I stared at singular 
Southern sky

She reminded about stillness 
strategy soundlessness
embodied etiquette 
empathy reflecting my
mirrors
we practiced prayers
exchanging piety for 
piquant dreams
from triangular head 
could I trust in timing 

Careful calm collected
one leg up slowly 
shake observe
turn head left
turn head right 

Awareness quivers on 
awaiting angle
divining a tiny trial of luck
focus no fidget 
its Christmas Eve 
ChristLight announced 
from a darkly 
lucid mantis womb 

Her greenstick keys 
unlock patient portals to 
my Eternal Heart


©GhairoDanielsPoetry
&Song2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/26/2024 2:14:00 AM
I absolutely love your wordplay and how your poem flows in such an eloquent manner dear poetic soul. Its so good to see you write and post ! I especially love the lines “ She reminded about stillness strategy soundlessness embodied etiquette empathy reflecting my mirrors“ just stunning! You have a way with words and your use of alliterations is truly impressive! Hope holidays are treating you well! Sending you and your loved ones light today and always.
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