Christmas Eve From Mouse's Viewpoint

It’s Christmas Eve and through the house There creeps a curious little mouse. He climbs into the big arm chair And finds the cookies waiting there. He only takes the smallest bite. Santa will find his treat tonight. He gazes with wonder at the tree And the bright wrapped gifts left there to be A mystery tale to tell his spouse, When he gets home, this curious mouse. What an adventure it has been, He has drunk of some spilled over gin, That had been left upon the table. His wife will think it is a fable He has concocted to amuse her. She is home-bound, we must excuse her. He once came home all out of breath To say he had been scared to death By a huge rat with fluffy tail. She noticed he was very pale. “While I was nibbling off some cheese To bring to you, my love, to please. He almost had me in his paws. I’m sure he wasn’t Santa Claus”. But this night is so very quiet. He spies some fruitcake, has to try it. It reminds him of that sip of gin And wonders if his head will spin. He hears a noise, runs for his life, Carrying fruitcake for his wife. Christmas morning, spread before their eyes For the baby mice, a grand surprise. Their mama had fixed a Christmas meal From food their dad managed to steal. A bit of butter, a glob of jam And a fairly good-sized piece of ham. Bread crumbs saved from other forays. They had enough to eat for days. Those little mice would never waste it. If they didn’t like it they’d still taste it. This food their mamma set before them, Their dad risked his life to get it for them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/8/2014 3:19:00 PM
A very cute and fun Christmas poem to read! I really like the rhyme and the flow of your words here. I enjoyed this one very much. Well done, Joyce! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:22:00 AM
Lol :-) Awesome Christmas write... for the mouse? Congrats on your winning poem, Joyce .
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Date: 1/4/2014 11:04:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on the Christmas and congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:21:00 PM
Joyce, .. Thank you for the lovely poem. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting my contest... Always & forever <3<3<3 LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Joyce. It was so cute. Merry Christmas. Kim
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:56:00 PM
Smile ˜ Wonderfully pleasant holiday's creation ˜ My dear precious & priceless dear old friend Joyce Johnson ˜ Mice are quite interesting little creatures and your lovely pen brought about a bit of what might I say, life perhaps to those whom consider their existence void to anything at all yet, all life should be viewed amid some degree of light * "Glory Be To 'God'" * Very lovely and I admire that little fella for risking his life for his loves ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ My love to your treasures always, John!:) ˜
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