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Christmas Enchantment

On Christmas Eve when the children are finally asleep, a blessed silence hovers in the air that oozes with divine melody. I have to gasp as I look out my window and find a new dusting of snow glistening in the moonglow. How perfect is this enchanted night~ I swear up in the sky that must be the star of Bethlehem I see. chaste christmas snowflakes soft with anticipation ~ a most holy night Submitted on November 20, 2019 for contest DECEMBER OR JANUARY HAIBUN sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 2/8/2020 1:37:00 AM
So many congrats Line for this divine poem, which captures the very essence of Christmas - utterly exquisite and a FAV for me. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/8/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/27/2019 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful haibun Caren, Good luck in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/27/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thanks, Charles. I don't mind sharing the credit with Caren at all. LOL
Date: 11/24/2019 7:01:00 PM
As the poem says, Enchanting. Love this Haibun.
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML.
Date: 11/24/2019 7:53:00 AM
Enchanting one, Line: Just how Christmas should be. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
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Date: 11/22/2019 10:14:00 AM
This is beautiful, Line!
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim.
Date: 11/21/2019 8:30:00 AM
A wonderful poem, dear friend. Love it... Gina
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Date: 11/21/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Gina. Much appreciated.

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