Christmas cold moon

Christmas cold nocturne
	brightness lights the noiseless night ~
		restless reindeer rise

(December Cold Moon – Mohawk)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Lovely work! It enchanted my mind.
Fowler Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Nice to see you Paige. Many thanks for your visit and enchanting comments. ;) Much appreciation! :)
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December 27, 2023 at 4:03 PM
I like this one, Linda. You exhinit knowledge of the “turn’ in the third line, which I appreiciate. Excellent imagery, throughout I never thought of the moon as coored, either! Pangie
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December 28, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Hi dear Pangie. I am pleased you liked this one and appreciate the comments you make. hugs Linda :)
Flood Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 5:45 PM
I almost see those reindeer getting to their feet and debating…”‘So… late again, is he?”. A wonderful haiku, Linda
Fowler Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Maybe running late while checking his list the second time. ;) Thanks Terry Happy Boxing Day! :)
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December 25, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Very nicely done. Happy Christmas
Fowler Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Hi Andrea! Thank you and have a Happy Christmas! :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 9:05 PM
Getting ready for the big drop unsure what lies ahead. Merry Christmas Linda. Tom
Fowler Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Ready, set, drop! We are never sure what lies ahead Tom, the present is IT! Happy Christmas! :)
Poet Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Linda, your haiku exudes inspiration and wisdom, with a subtle touch of illumination in its conclusion. Merry Christmas to you and yours
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December 24, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Many thanks Las. Merry Christmas to you and yours and all blessings throughout the New Year! :)
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