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CHRISTMAS BLISS

My 11 year old daughter had to write a poem for one
of her classes.This is her first one.She got a pencil and
paper and sat down and this is what she wrote.And the
talent continues.



It's Christmas day, and the children hesitate, then slide
down the stairs, they just can't wait. The cookies are 
crumbs, the milk is gone, and there's crystalline snow
on the front lawn. The turkey is stuffed, the potatoes
mashed, and the children are eager to get the presents
unwrapped. They thought Saint Nick would never betray
them, as they look at the presents, an abundant amount 
beside the tree stem. On this pleasant day, Jesus was born,
"There shall be no sins!" Jesus had sworn. So we're all 
thankful, for what he has done. But people had hung him, 
out in the hot sun. But all that's behind, don't recollect. 
Be happy, raise your attitude, don't even fret. It's 
Christmas day, and the children are wholesome. One 
little girl is eating a plum. It's time for bed, at 8 in the 
night, the dusk of Christmas is a beautiful sight.

                                                 Written By Megan Devon Bono
                                               

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/25/2017 4:34:00 PM
what a charming poem Colleen it is so lovely to see the talent continuing to the next generation:-) I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and new year:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2017 9:43:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. Blessings Richard. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:31:00 AM
Lovely write! Congrats on your fine win, Colleen.
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:38:00 PM
Enjoyed your write on Christmas joy and congratulations on the win, Colleen
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:16:00 PM
A great poem, Colleen. You re a natural. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:06:00 PM
Hi Colleen, and Megan B.. .. Thank you for the lovely poem. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting my contest... Always & forever <3<3<3 LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:07:00 AM
hey, give the little lady my congrats on her win in this contest I just now see judged!
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win...AO
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:27:00 PM
Colleen, I like Nathans comment... do tell your daughter the poem is wonderful and amazing it came from an 11 year old...xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:35:00 PM
tell your daughter Megan, with the beautiful name. Congratulations! Nate
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Date: 4/12/2013 11:26:00 PM
Fantastic job for an 11year old. You must be proud. Positive with a serious message imbedded in the lines. She has talent. Thanks for your visit today. Hugs Rick
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Date: 1/22/2012 6:32:00 PM
Dear Colleen, An 11 Year Old Prodigy well Versed in the Art of POETRY. Dear Megan, I applaud YOUR Laureatus Pen; Please read this to Your Mother Tonight, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 1/14/2012 4:48:00 PM
I know you'll be around. So if its attention all you have to do is ask. By now you know that we are here for you.just don't go around punching steel beams love john
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:43:00 PM
A very beautiful poem your daughter wrote...... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 12/28/2010 8:40:00 AM
Beautiful job Megan, keep up your talent. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:32:00 PM
a very nicely written poem, Megan and depicting what the real christmas is all about. Jesus. I enjoyed it. a Blessed Christmas to you and your family!-Robert
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:31:00 PM
Aww sweetie so nice! You keep writing gal! A poet just like Mom! Light & Love HUGS & Kisses and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/17/2010 1:29:00 PM
She certainly writes like a mature woman, Colleen. Please tell Megan how much I enjoyed her poem. Merry Christmas to your family! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2010 1:20:00 PM
Interesting words used ...She has a large vocabulary for an eleven year old young lady..I hope that she continues to pen her thoughts down to share with others ...I would say that she has the gift..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:14:00 AM
Three kudos and cheers to the little one for penning this lovely write on Christmas Bliss, Colleen
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Date: 12/16/2010 6:55:00 PM
I see you have my talent.You did a wonderful job.I am proud of you.LOVE MOM.
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