Christmas Bliss

My 11 year old daughter had to write a poem for one
of her classes.This is her first one.She got a pencil and
paper and sat down and this is what she wrote.And the
talent continues.



It's Christmas day, and the children hesitate, then slide
down the stairs, they just can't wait. The cookies are 
crumbs, the milk is gone, and there's crystalline snow
on the front lawn. The turkey is stuffed, the potatoes
mashed, and the children are eager to get the presents
unwrapped. They thought Saint Nick would never betray
them, as they look at the presents, an abundant amount 
beside the tree stem. On this pleasant day, Jesus was born,
"There shall be no sins!" Jesus had sworn. So we're all 
thankful, for what he has done. But people had hung him, 
out in the hot sun. But all that's behind, don't recollect. 
Be happy, raise your attitude, don't even fret. It's 
Christmas day, and the children are wholesome. One 
little girl is eating a plum. It's time for bed, at 8 in the 
night, the dusk of Christmas is a beautiful sight.

                                                 Written By Megan Devon Bono
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 4:34 PM
what a charming poem Colleen it is so lovely to see the talent continuing to the next generation:-) I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and new year:-) hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. Blessings Richard. I enjoyed reading this one again.
Oyewole Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Lovely write! Congrats on your fine win, Colleen.
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 10:38 PM
Enjoyed your write on Christmas joy and congratulations on the win, Colleen
Johnson Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 10:16 PM
A great poem, Colleen. You re a natural. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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January 4, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Hi Colleen, and Megan B.. .. Thank you for the lovely poem. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting my contest... Always & forever <3<3<3 LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:07 AM
hey, give the little lady my congrats on her win in this contest I just now see judged!
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on your win...AO
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May 8, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Colleen, I like Nathans comment... do tell your daughter the poem is wonderful and amazing it came from an 11 year old...xox~ Linda
D. Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:35 PM
tell your daughter Megan, with the beautiful name. Congratulations! Nate
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 11:26 PM
Fantastic job for an 11year old. You must be proud. Positive with a serious message imbedded in the lines. She has talent. Thanks for your visit today. Hugs Rick
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January 22, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Dear Colleen, An 11 Year Old Prodigy well Versed in the Art of POETRY. Dear Megan, I applaud YOUR Laureatus Pen; Please read this to Your Mother Tonight, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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December 24, 2011 at 8:43 PM
A very beautiful poem your daughter wrote...... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
Freeman Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Beautiful job Megan, keep up your talent. Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:32 PM
a very nicely written poem, Megan and depicting what the real christmas is all about. Jesus. I enjoyed it. a Blessed Christmas to you and your family!-Robert
Guzzi Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Aww sweetie so nice! You keep writing gal! A poet just like Mom! Light & Love HUGS & Kisses and Merry Christmas
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 1:29 PM
She certainly writes like a mature woman, Colleen. Please tell Megan how much I enjoyed her poem. Merry Christmas to your family! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Interesting words used ...She has a large vocabulary for an eleven year old young lady..I hope that she continues to pen her thoughts down to share with others ...I would say that she has the gift..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Three kudos and cheers to the little one for penning this lovely write on Christmas Bliss, Colleen
Bono Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 6:55 PM
I see you have my talent.You did a wonderful job.I am proud of you.LOVE MOM.
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