Caren Krutsinger Poet Senryu

Christmas At Grandmas

it tastes like christmas
a tiramisu moment
critique by age five 

where is the popcorn
we all pretend to look
but it chokes grandma

It sounds like santa
jingle bells rocking the roof
critique by age eight

where is grandpa?
loud snoring leads us to him
christmas at grandma’s

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Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2022 at 2:52 PM Loud snoring leads one to Grandpa…lol! Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2022 at 7:27 PM You know that's right.

L Milton Hankins January 17, 2022 at 12:47 PM I remember that well...granddad in his recliner snoozing away even though there was chaos around him. He knew something we didn't! Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2022 at 7:27 PM They are wise, these grandfathers.

Karen Croft January 17, 2022 at 10:01 AM I remember those moments, the smells and the tastes! Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2022 at 7:28 PM I like thinking back.