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Christmas At Grandmas

it tastes like christmas
a tiramisu moment
critique by age five 

where is the popcorn
we all pretend to look
but it chokes grandma

It sounds like santa
jingle bells rocking the roof
critique by age eight

where is grandpa?
loud snoring leads us to him
christmas at grandma’s

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:52:00 PM
Loud snoring leads one to Grandpa…lol!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2022 7:27:00 PM
You know that's right.
Date: 1/17/2022 12:47:00 PM
I remember that well...granddad in his recliner snoozing away even though there was chaos around him. He knew something we didn't!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2022 7:27:00 PM
They are wise, these grandfathers.
Date: 1/17/2022 10:01:00 AM
I remember those moments, the smells and the tastes!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2022 7:28:00 PM
I like thinking back.

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