Christian

Christian

Crisis why cries Christ mess

Confusion the challenge

Communion the message

Cuddled in manger a

Conscript lover of peace

Come with me he shouted

Conquer hypocrisy 


02nd January 2016


Pleidades for Christmas

7 times 6 syllables
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Callus Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Hypocrisy has no place where love and peace are concerned. Christ pointed this out several times, especially to the Pharisees!! A meaningful Pleiades, Kai. Regards // paul
Breedt Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 12:21 AM
Very dramatic pleiade in C . Also a wake up call I loved it
Neumann Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Jannie. Kai
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Kai. : )
Neumann Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:13 AM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate that. Kai
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 9:31 PM
Great message in your poem, Kai. Thanks for your support of my contest. Congrats for the win.
Neumann Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:15 AM
Thank you Andrea. Your contest are always stimulating. Many wishes, Kai
White Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 12:36 AM
Yeah... conquer hypocrisy... indeed. Good luck, Kai.
Neumann Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Darre. Many wishes, Kai
Neumann Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Thank you WW. We have all year and more to follow the command in line seven. Wishes, Kai
Warrior Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Very well done my friend Kai...good luck in C...god bless...^WW^
Neumann Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:28 AM
Thank you. Kai
Hardison Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Well put with conviction Have a splendid New Year. Peace, Love and Joy
Neumann Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:28 AM
Lots of love, peace and joy to you too. And thank you, Kai
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