John Lusardi Poet Prose

Chores

What memories and thought pools we swim in
Between two distant unreachable shores
A sandy future palmed and green
Or the rocky crags of endless chores.

2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 25'
1/26/2022

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Brian Sambourne December 13, 2021 at 7:17 PM Profound lines, John. We do wade through memories + thought pools. Strong opening that draws the reader in + rewards. Cheers, Brian

L Milton Hankins May 20, 2021 at 9:37 AM Wonderful quatrain, John. You have painted a captivating word painting here. John Lusardi May 20, 2021 at 1:40 PM Grazie mille ??

Caren Krutsinger May 20, 2021 at 7:46 AM You grabbed me up here "What memories and thought pools we swim in" and did not release me even at the end. John Lusardi May 20, 2021 at 8:25 AM Thanks again Caren, makes me happy, someone takes something from it.