Chores

What memories and thought pools we swim in Between two distant unreachable shores A sandy future palmed and green Or the rocky crags of endless chores. 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 25' 1/26/2022

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/13/2021 7:17:00 PM

Profound lines, John. We do wade through memories + thought pools. Strong opening that draws the reader in + rewards. Cheers, Brian

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/20/2021 9:37:00 AM

Wonderful quatrain, John. You have painted a captivating word painting here.

John Lusardi
Date: 5/20/2021 1:40:00 PM

Grazie mille ??

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/20/2021 7:46:00 AM

You grabbed me up here "What memories and thought pools we swim in" and did not release me even at the end.

John Lusardi
Date: 5/20/2021 8:25:00 AM

Thanks again Caren, makes me happy, someone takes something from it.