Chore

Blades of grass
quite bluntly
are needing cut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for posting your wonderful poetry Ned. It was a pleasure to read. I am hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Nice expresions, ned
Bagnall Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 4:19 AM
Well though out, I prefer the more traditional sylable count, but this works well for me. Thanks for you kind comments on my poetry.
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May 31, 2011 at 2:46 AM
awesome haiku ned i loved it luv*Skat
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