Chopped Ii - Moth-Winged Minuet

Moth-winged Minuet


Closing my eyes I flew
from lonely chair
through open window
in mesmerized anticipation.
Drawn toward the glowing
warmth of the porch light.
Flames torched my heart
as another circled.
The crickets kept time
as we danced
a moth-winged minuet
of transparent melancholy.


submitted to Craig Cornish – Chopped II – Poetry Contest
11/8/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Stunning images of wonderment and strangely, tranquility...loved it CC Many congrats
Lawless Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Thanks for stopping by Mark, always good to hear from you.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Beautifully flowing poem. Congratulations on your win.
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Thank you Brenda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Congrats on your win, John! Yours was one of my favorites...hugs, Rhonda
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Thanks Rhonda for following up with congrats. Always appreciated.
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:57 AM
short but perfectly formed! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Thanks Jan for your continued support.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:29 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful entry receiving top honors John!
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Thanks Connie glad you enjoyed it.
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Wow, John this is magnificent. Congratulations on your huge win with this gem.
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Thank yuo Maurice for your high praise
Mohn Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Big congrats John on this unique well written gem...absolutely love the last sentence
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Thank you David, for your comment and support.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Wonderful! I love the personification and unique take on the contest, John...love and blessings, Rhonda
Lawless Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Thanks for checking in Rhonda. Always nice to hear from new (to me) "soupers"'
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