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choosing neatness over people

His sloppy slipshod attitude Was picked up by both daughters His son took after his wife A minimalist who never abided a mess The son never let the hoarders into his house Losing touch with his father and his sisters Choosing neatness and cleanliness over people Just as his mother had done.

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