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child within us, given to play in sync with life, joyfully sways whilst ego dwells in narrow grooves habits difficult to remove painting bright blue skies in dull grey 14-July-2021

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Date: 7/13/2021 11:25:00 PM
child within us, Ego... painting bright blue skies in dull grey Beautiful.
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Date: 7/14/2021 2:35:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 7/13/2021 10:46:00 PM
That would be a sight to see. Painting the sky grey.
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