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Chokra Choka

The old Chokra chokes

on adult 'boy's' servitude

should have no worries

tends Tim's garden exchanges

labour for money

blessed in helpless poverty

judge not Tim's envy

he understands no better

Reincarnation

Cast out Karma spells of Peace

desire a master

Nirvana escapes him but

wants to tend flowers

Tim never walked in Chokra's

footwear how could he

thorns in his mind have no shame

slaves have no shoes and no name



28th October

Syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com

Choka written for Edward Ibeh's contest:

'One Of The Seven Deadly Sins'

Chokra is derogatory (in South Asia) for a boy, especially one employed as a 

servant. Adults as well are called boy in lieu of their name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/29/2018 2:04:00 AM
I had no idea of Chokra. A good composition with suitable title. Congrats.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/30/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Anisha. Kind wishes to you, Kai

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