Fatima Nusairat Poet Free verse

Choking With Silence

Between husk of grapes
And sweetness of wine; 
I was boiling vinegar! 

While I was looking for
God’s paradises in my way,
Searching for the reasons that
Makes our hearts fenced with cold.
My thoughts stranded!

I was kneeling with dawn praying,
Choking with silence,
While wailing water,
Hurts trees and stones 

The time was coming to me,
Carried as torch wandering
Around the dreams harbors, 
It was savor as a disturb waves   
As if the waves have the flavor
Of cold and death when hit by the wind! 

While I was looking for
God’s Paradises in my way, 
I was boiling vinegar, 
Perhaps the door will open
Towards god 


Written by © Fatima Nusairat

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Ingrid Showalter Swift June 11, 2014 at 7:52 AM Hey There Really love this first : Between husk of grapes and sweetness of wine; I was boiling vinegar! Something about husk of grapes really grabbed me! Love the hard n softness contrasting...made my mind demand to ponder the peeling of a grape...the very edge where skin meets the meat of the grape....to feel it being pulled back..does that make sense? Enjoyed this write for sure! Ing Fatima Nusairat June 16, 2014 at 6:54 PM Thank you so much Inqrid Showwalter Swift :) Appreciate your lovely comment.