Choking On Water

Breathless

Mouth gasping for

Air

Choking on water

How do I speak...

How do I release what I feel....

THE MINDS little joke

A cage of ones entrappment

The Surroundment of laughter

Isn't it fun?

A realm with these

Outsiders....

(Breathing heavy)

Taking them a piece

And jabbing ones

Innocence too the ground

Isnt fun?

That persons choking

On water

Unending suffocation

The clouded

Nit pick of torment

That persons choked on water

No help attempted

I choked on water
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 19, 2016 at 9:29 PM
or how i could improve it
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January 19, 2016 at 8:32 PM
tell me how you feel about this poem
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