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Choking On Water

Breathless Mouth gasping for Air Choking on water How do I speak... How do I release what I feel.... THE MINDS little joke A cage of ones entrappment The Surroundment of laughter Isn't it fun? A realm with these Outsiders.... (Breathing heavy) Taking them a piece And jabbing ones Innocence too the ground Isnt fun? That persons choking On water Unending suffocation The clouded Nit pick of torment That persons choked on water No help attempted I choked on water

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Date: 1/19/2016 9:29:00 PM
or how i could improve it
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:32:00 PM
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