Choked Bloom

The girl weeps a bruised and bitter rain,
A childhood choked, a garden grown in pain.
My laughter, brittle glass, it cracks and breaks,
Beneath the weight of unforgiving stakes.

They built a fortress, walls of rigid stone,
And left my heart a barren, windswept zone.
No lover's hand to soothe, no gentle gaze,
Just scornful whispers in a hateful maze.

Each hallway echoes with a judging eye,
A constant feeling that I want to die.
They see a monster where a child should bloom,
And fill my days with ever-present gloom.

The books lie open, pages blurred with tears,
School's a torment, fueling all my fears.
A secret festers, a corrosive blight,
Consuming hope, and plunging me in night.

I paint a smile, a mask of purest white,
To hide the shadows lurking in the light.
But when the moon ascends its lonely throne,
The tears return, and I am all alone.

A burden I believe, a whispered curse,
This aching need to flee, to be dispersed.
The razor sings a siren's tempting call,
A fragile promise to escape it all.

The girl weeps, a final sigh,
A whispered plea to simply die,
My childhood dead, a silent tomb, 
Lost in this endless aching gloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Chikwela Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Diamond songs told us " Kioo hakidanganyi mama umejipodoa umepodoka" which means that the milor doesn't lie, how you see yourself it is how you are
Chikwela Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Diamond songs told us " Kioo hakidanganyi mama umejipodoa umepodoka" which means that the milor doesn't lie, how you see yourself it is how you are
Woods Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:10 AM
I hope this isn't how you are feeling right now... that you are writing fiction or this is your past not your present. You've opened a vein to reveal pain and stirred emotions. Great writing! Xo
Jabbar Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 6:01 AM
Thanks even though my poems are how I feel this comment made me better!
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