Choka #3

You set the standards, And they should not be challenged By the obsolete. Since you are the boss, You deserve to rule the world, By getting ahead.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2010 12:48:00 PM

I agree with you, I rule my world with communication. That is my standard, enjoyed,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2010 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Dakarai but the Joker is from another site , he slammed me in the site with a weak poem.. I am just posting it here on the soup. my peeps are asking me in my soup mail when i am going to post a poem. so i came and brought them this one. ---p.s. who is this boss of yours . love the passage, always a friend,..p.d.