Choices

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~Choices~ ( Rhyme) It seems like we all go through Struggles, sorrows and great strife But take a moment and look around you There are many good things in your life God give us blessings and much more But we take for granted all the good things We often shun His blessings And only think all the wrong things We often ignore what's most important in life We take for granted the blessings He sends The world and the troubles makes us blind And empty and lost most people spend their life Life is so hard and the heart is often afraid A product will be from all the choices you made! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 January,14,2015

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Gary Bateman

Date: 1/14/2015 5:28:00 PM

A most wonderful write my dearest "D." We've all lived with our "choices" in this life. Things are not meant to be perfect. If so, we'd all be GODS!! The Poem I wrote (I believe last month) on "Being Courageous" is always worth a read to remind one of the importance of driving on with your life no matter what comes one's way. Life is can be, and indeed at time is, very hard. Be Bold. Be Courageous. And Live Everyday Like It's Most Special!! (My Philosophy!!) A 7+++++ and a FAV. Best, Gary XOXO

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/13/2015 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Gary , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, my very dear friend! I hope you and Ingrid are okay. Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you too! :-) Love and hugs! xoxox D.