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Yesterday did you see, At no time was I me, Today I am, I be, Sanity was my fee. Yesterday had no goal, An empty soul, An overactive brain bowl, The world smelt foul. My mind carnal, Appetite to life brutal, Everyday a battle, Daily burst a bubble. Yesterday held loaded pistol, Today am not a puzzle, You and I equal, View became global. Christmas is tomorrow, Forget guns and sorrow, Only in kindness wallow, And pride swallow My road paved with pebbles, Don’t associate with rebels, Life has no medals, Side with angels not devils.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/2/2024 5:06:00 PM

Interesting poem Jennifer. An exploration of disturbance and lack of self esteem. There must be a lot underneath these feelings and what causes and remediates them, and the causes and cures for bad feelings are not simple for us. I think there is a severe shortage of good therapists, but your poem may help a lot of people!!

Valsa George

Date: 8/28/2024 9:57:00 PM

Let us change from insanity to sanity and brutality to humaneness. Forget yesterday's heartbreaking incidents and focus on today's brighter promises. Move from purposelessness to questing for goals. Change from wielding guns to holding palm leaves of peace. Stop all our association with the devil and join league with angels. Forget the turbulent times and wait for the toll of Christmas bells. A beautiful poem exhorting all for a positive change. Have a great weekend, dear Jenny. Love and hugs.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/26/2024 3:43:00 PM

Good advice Jennifer, for those existing with an empty soul. Love the last line too… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/26/2024 9:25:00 AM

From the depth of hell to rise to blissful heaven. Don't we all have such moods? Maybe some calming medicine will help. No drugs or weed though. Think positive. Loved your last line. Hugs.

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2024 10:58:00 AM

I like how your poem poem captures a powerful journey from confusion and inner turmoil to clarity and a broader perspective on life. The contrast between the past and present, the struggle with sanity, and the eventual embrace of kindness and equality are expressed vividly. The imagery of moving from a "loaded pistol" to a "global view" is particularly striking, highlighting a transformation from a narrow, dangerous mindset to one of understanding and peace. The closing lines offer wise advice on choosing the right path, emphasizing the importance of kindness and humility.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/24/2024 5:55:00 AM

Jennifer, your lines really resonate with me! So many choices in life there are , we just need to be reminded that we can!! Excellent poem! Happy Saturday xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2024 6:30:00 AM

Sounds like your more yourself today. We all have those down days. Hugs from me to you!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/21/2024 11:24:00 AM

Siding with angels not devils means withdrawing support from ridiculers and haters. Yes, agreed

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2024 10:49:00 AM

We always hope that we make the right choices as we go through life. Hope you're keeping well Jennifer. Tom