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choice color, artist! the rainbow chose me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2012 8:16:00 AM
Well done....I love to paint and draw and create...you captured me with this. Just wonderful - Shaz
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:15:00 AM
lovely written, i seem, to understand it inner meaning
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:12:00 AM
Congratulations Edward x
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:21:00 PM
Big congrats, Edward. I agree with Cyndi, the last two lines are very memorable!
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:20:00 PM
Wonderful thinking here Edward.Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/8/2011 7:57:00 PM
Super awesome first place modern haiku!! Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/8/2011 5:17:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win with this ultra modern haiku, very original and creative...
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:41:00 PM
interesting write..takes ones mind many places Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:27:00 PM
Like this. Congrats on your win, Edward! Kim
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:09:00 PM
cool OXOX Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:57:00 PM
This just made me smile, and I enjoyed how you ended this, Edward! Super congrats on your wonderful first place win :D!
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:12:00 PM
Very cool Edward! I will share this with my sister and her girlfriend too...they will love it!
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Edward Mccormick
Date: 12/8/2011 12:45:00 PM
You are fabulous to do so Natalie. Thanks for telling me, it makes me happy! ~ECMc
Date: 12/8/2011 12:11:00 PM
Ed, congrats on your win..David
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Edward Mccormick
Date: 12/8/2011 12:43:00 PM
Thanks David, it makes my heart swell! ~ECMc
Date: 12/8/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Edward. Love, Carol
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Edward Mccormick
Date: 12/8/2011 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Carol! You are always so on-the-ball with the posting of these contests and that is highly appreciated... One day I hope to beat-you-to-the-punch and leave a comment for a winner before I see you already have! Haha, this is not actually a challenge, just fun. Such a wonderful community it is here... ~ECMc

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