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Patri Venkata Ramana

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Contest Name: Why I Abhor AI Generated Poems

Sponsor: JCB Brul

Date: 15-06-2025

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picking a fresh fruit is more euphoric than picking up in garden


Placed: 3rd (POTD)

Copyright © Patri Venkata Ramana | Year Posted 2025

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June 18, 2025 at 11:44 AM

Picking fruit is different than having a machine do it for you. I completely understand the metaphor within. A belated congratulations Patri, on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 18, 2025 at 10:26 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 17, 2025 at 11:55 PM

Congratulations on your POTD!!

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 18, 2025 at 12:35 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Benjamin Bartley

June 17, 2025 at 4:36 PM

A monoku worth POTD. Congrats.

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 18, 2025 at 12:35 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 17, 2025 at 3:16 PM

I remember picking fresh blackberries as a child, rinsing, sprinkling with sugar…yum! Congrats on POTD!

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 18, 2025 at 12:34 AM

a nice memory. Thank you so much for the compliments.

Paula Goldsmith

June 17, 2025 at 8:48 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your Monoku write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:32 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

June 17, 2025 at 7:37 AM

Hello Patri, I agree that it is more euphoric to eat fresh fruit. I have weeded many a garden in my day. Congrats on POTD. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:31 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

June 17, 2025 at 7:01 AM

Hello Patri :-) Very nice! Congratulations on your POTD win, have a nice day :-)

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:30 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 17, 2025 at 6:08 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win, Patri. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:30 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 17, 2025 at 5:42 AM

Patri, congratulations on POTD.

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:29 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

sara Etgen-Baker

June 17, 2025 at 4:01 AM

a simple summertime insight. congrats on POTD!

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:29 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 17, 2025 at 3:15 AM

Congratulations on your potd win! Enjoy your day in the sun!

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:27 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

thriveni c mysore

June 17, 2025 at 2:03 AM

Congratulations on POTD dear poet. Many don't like soiled hands for sure. clever message. Cheers!!!

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:27 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2025 at 1:50 AM

- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Patri ... enjoy :) -

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:25 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments

June 17, 2025 at 12:55 AM

Congratulations Patri on receiving the honour of poem of the day for your wise Monoku… Beryl

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:25 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2025 at 3:33 PM

Nice analogy. Congrats

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:23 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

June 16, 2025 at 9:19 AM

yikes ~

Patri Venkata Ramana

June 17, 2025 at 9:22 AM

Thank you so much.

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