Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Chocolate-Trochee

Rich chocolate 'pon my thin lips.
On taste buds twang sits
Minute; lifetime on big hips.
Now clothes don't fit

To a diet must commit
Carrots celery dip
Peanut chocolate dip permit
My pants can now zip


Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: The 7/5 Trochee Poetry Contest



using choc lit as pronunciation
Celery pronounced cel ry

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Amy Green May 20, 2012 at 9:44 AM HAHA, Like this one a lot!

Black Eyed Susan May 16, 2012 at 11:03 AM awesome! andera will totally love this since she loves food so much. I love the 1st verse :) everything goes right to my hips (and thighs) too! diets - ugh.

Don Johnson May 8, 2012 at 4:52 PM love it luv it lubbit.... the modern curse of what you eat, come back to sit an stay in the meat, the blubber is arising , unwanted an surprising , so fat cant see me feet, drattalising:( but i gor a well padded seat:)

John Rhinem May 8, 2012 at 3:48 PM Ps. Smile ~ "Your Welcome & Thank You, 'My Beautiful Love.'" *

Elizabeth Wesley May 8, 2012 at 2:42 PM Clever Sara, love the "lifetime on hips" line; a truth we avoid at our own peril. All the best in the contest, a wonderful entry! :)

Jack Horne May 8, 2012 at 8:45 AM LOL, got a chuckle from this one, Sara - and I know Andrea will love it too

Jessica K May 8, 2012 at 8:03 AM Haha oh goodness Sara, you just made my day :)

James Peranteau May 8, 2012 at 7:37 AM Humorous write dear poet ! It was fun reading Sara ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

John Rhinem May 7, 2012 at 2:23 PM Smile ˜ Owww, I Think By Now Your Beauty Knows Exactly What You Do Unto Myself Don't You, My Dear Precious & Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Or Perhaps Tis Just Myself Dreaming These Dreams; In Chocolate Swirls Amid Strawberry ? Thank You, For Your Beauties Kind Visit &, I Love Your Pretty Poem * My Love Always, John!:) ˜