Chocolate On Your Lips

Pure
luscious 
decadent 
self indulging
with the molten chocolate on your lips,
felt the finery of her burning fire,
as you placed your,
warmth on her 
fine skin
as 
a
moment
of rising
which held tales of
delicacy dripping in fine finesse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alhemaidy Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Very sweet!
Sharma  Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 11:50 PM
Wowwww what a sweet write with chocolate delicacy.. Absolutely gorgeous.. Such a passionate and stunning take for the contest too, loved reading this tetractys, full of splendor and magical moments..
Messina Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 3:23 PM
Wow! Why do I suddenly have the urge for some "Hot Chocolate" lol lovely write, Aura
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:52 AM
- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, T.A.R. :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 4:42 AM
Ah dahlin, i am in awe of how you’ve written this passionately moving take on the prompt. I love your use of chocolate too here and your use of wordplay to fit the theme of the poem, so eloquently. Clever and creative. I especially loved “ felt the finery of her burning fire,“ “ delicacy dripping in fine finesse“ delightful and so stunning! Amazing flow, pleasure reading this one. Congratulations on your well deserved win
Onpaper Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:56 AM
My goodness!!! This piece is making me feel things dahlin!!! molten chocolate on your lips,.. mmmmmmmmhmmmmmmm I dunno I feel hot and hungry at the same time now .. tales of delicacy dripping in fine finesse… child !!! Mmm u gonna make me go get me some of those delicacy aee !!! Just out of curiosity……. Where to get some????… asking for a friend XD
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