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Chocolate Hills

rain showers the land displays knolls of green grasses tarsiers free park play sun shimmers brilliance upon brown mounds verdure lair big chocolate queue (c) Olive Eloisa 11:54am June 19, 2014 ***Chocolate Hills is one of the many natural wonders found in Bohol, Philippines. They are rich of minerals particularly that of marine limestone, fossils, corals etc. Home of wild life species including the smallest monkey in the world: the tarsier..:)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/1/2014 11:18:00 AM

Excellent haikus and your tarsiers. I liked your new avatar. Love...rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/2/2014 7:06:00 AM

Thanks much ...:) you must see them. :D

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2014 4:48:00 PM

To en-trance your readers with short descriptive lines is paramount to your talents Olive. Isn't the Tarsier so cute in a way. Let's hope they have habitat to sustain them indefinitely. I so love reading your poetry, it makes me smile, James :) x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 1:51:00 AM

hahaha :D yes it is so cute.. :D i hope too until I see them for real though.. :D this poem is made through some pictures and videos I come to view.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/23/2014 7:42:00 AM

I had to look up verdure, what a great word. Nice images. Have you entered the current haiku contests? With work like this you should.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 1:50:00 AM

thanks much Scott.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2014 5:56:00 PM

I love your haiku Olive_eloi! and the play on the senses! This is a winner. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:34:00 AM

Oh Paul.. :D i don't know I was just inspired of the scenery.. :D and really this place is beautiful.. though earthquakes have damaged some of it still still its a beauty.. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2014 2:19:00 PM

Ok I will try, but I hope you also have Pizza there!!!!! Then it will be heaven!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/20/2014 5:22:00 PM

loools.. :D!!!!!!!!!!! have you read that pizza.. :D!!! yes, ill have one.. :D with some shake!!! :D and will do those shake so our fats all quake and we'll both have a good shape! will that be ok? :D :P

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/19/2014 11:23:00 PM

Wow, this is great!!!! Glad you explained! Can I eat these hills if I go there? If I go you will have to write a new poem, Empty Desert, hills all gone!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/20/2014 12:19:00 PM

hahhaha :D give it a try buddy Art and tell me how is it. :D!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2014 12:56:00 PM

Wow!! To be able to enter a place that is rich in mineral stones..Thanks for the visit to my page..I was delighted to read your work..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 6:09:00 PM

thank you to SAra as each time I read yours you fill me with the awesome beauty of nature and your creative refreshing write.. :D thanks much GOD bless you always.. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2014 10:50:00 AM

stunning , simply stunning! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 6:06:00 PM

hugs too Jan.. :) wee i love these virtual hugs it makes and fills the holes of my being away from home.. :) thank you and God bless.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 5:59:00 AM

What beauty you display her Olive....so rich...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Tim. :) I love the beauty of this place too and am planning to have a lil tour when I go home again.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2014 4:12:00 AM

- I would think that it really is beautiful - well done for the contest Olive ... a unique haiku poem !! - Wish you luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 5:54:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise.. :) it's always a pleasure to read your comment.. :) thank you so much.. :) hugs and hugs.. :) yes indeed these chocolate hills are beautiful... :) though earthquake and some where damaged still the hills presents a beauty,, :)