Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

Chocolate Hills

rain showers the land
displays knolls of green grasses
tarsiers free park play

sun shimmers brilliance
upon brown mounds verdure lair
big chocolate queue

(c) Olive Eloisa
11:54am
June 19, 2014

***Chocolate Hills is one of the many natural wonders found in Bohol, Philippines. They are rich of minerals particularly that of marine limestone, fossils, corals etc. Home of wild life species including the smallest monkey in the world: the tarsier..:)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 1, 2014 at 11:18 AM Excellent haikus and your tarsiers. I liked your new avatar. Love...rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 2, 2014 at 7:06 AM Thanks much ...:) you must see them. :D

James Fraser September 30, 2014 at 4:48 PM To en-trance your readers with short descriptive lines is paramount to your talents Olive. Isn't the Tarsier so cute in a way. Let's hope they have habitat to sustain them indefinitely. I so love reading your poetry, it makes me smile, James :) x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2014 at 1:51 AM hahaha :D yes it is so cute.. :D i hope too until I see them for real though.. :D this poem is made through some pictures and videos I come to view.

Scott Thirtyseven July 23, 2014 at 7:42 AM I had to look up verdure, what a great word. Nice images. Have you entered the current haiku contests? With work like this you should. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2014 at 1:50 AM thanks much Scott.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :)

Paul Callus June 21, 2014 at 5:56 PM I love your haiku Olive_eloi! and the play on the senses! This is a winner. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:34 AM Oh Paul.. :D i don't know I was just inspired of the scenery.. :D and really this place is beautiful.. though earthquakes have damaged some of it still still its a beauty.. :)

Arthur Vaso June 20, 2014 at 2:19 PM Ok I will try, but I hope you also have Pizza there!!!!! Then it will be heaven!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 20, 2014 at 5:22 PM loools.. :D!!!!!!!!!!! have you read that pizza.. :D!!! yes, ill have one.. :D with some shake!!! :D and will do those shake so our fats all quake and we'll both have a good shape! will that be ok? :D :P

Arthur Vaso June 19, 2014 at 11:23 PM Wow, this is great!!!! Glad you explained! Can I eat these hills if I go there? If I go you will have to write a new poem, Empty Desert, hills all gone!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 20, 2014 at 12:19 PM hahhaha :D give it a try buddy Art and tell me how is it. :D!!!!

Sara Kendrick June 19, 2014 at 12:56 PM Wow!! To be able to enter a place that is rich in mineral stones..Thanks for the visit to my page..I was delighted to read your work..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 6:09 PM thank you to SAra as each time I read yours you fill me with the awesome beauty of nature and your creative refreshing write.. :D thanks much GOD bless you always.. :D

Jan Allison June 19, 2014 at 10:50 AM stunning , simply stunning! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 6:06 PM hugs too Jan.. :) wee i love these virtual hugs it makes and fills the holes of my being away from home.. :) thank you and God bless.. :)

Tim Smith June 19, 2014 at 5:59 AM What beauty you display her Olive....so rich...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 5:58 PM Thank you Tim. :) I love the beauty of this place too and am planning to have a lil tour when I go home again.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2014 at 4:12 AM - I would think that it really is beautiful - well done for the contest Olive ... a unique haiku poem !! - Wish you luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM thank you Anne Lise.. :) it's always a pleasure to read your comment.. :) thank you so much.. :) hugs and hugs.. :) yes indeed these chocolate hills are beautiful... :) though earthquake and some where damaged still the hills presents a beauty,, :)