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I’ve dreamt of mountains of rocky rode ice cream, dappled with candy Kisses of purity sprinkled on top, hot steaming fudge pouring from heaven On high, cascading as if an ocean of water streaming downwards onto my Fantasy world of pleasure unleashed, behold chocolate dreaming, good to The last drooling mouthful! Give me illusions of M&M’S, delusions of chocolate covered mints extra thin, I’m tasting that sugar rush, and thinking unto myself as a woman who needs The company of men, after the discovery of this magnificent sinful delicious, Bitter to the sweet, farewell to heartache, its comforts fantasy food, So indulge me if you please! Who needs a brilliant rose covered garden, I’ll grow strawberries fields instead, And allow the fountains to spill over them, with gallons of melted dark chocolate, Wow as a poet now I’m really getting into this now, so let me become a farmer Of gluttony, excess and poundage’s expanded flesh, I’ll watch an exercise video Tomorrow morning, when I awake from my chocolate dreaming! Gum drops, and jelly beans don’t bring the same pleasures joy you see, Ask any Jane or Jo Ann of the female variety, and she’ll answer you just With the same response, give me chocolate or give me nothing, I’m a Heart shaped valentine all year round my gentlemen friend! Low fat to the none fat, leave us unhealthy people alone, we know what Tastes good to us, forget that unflavored rice cake, I’d prefer the double Fudge rippled round cake with extra creamy frosting on top, that’s A true woman’s reality fella, get the drift if you want a happy misses, Mister! Now fancy cards of devotion with words of poetry may make a lady Weak at the knees, but give that gal a torte made of layers of chocolate Deliverance, and all be forgiven if you forget a certain holiday of importance, Just throwing that one out there for future reference, gentlemen take a note From a voice of experience, chocolate rules a woman’s universe! Rock me to the boiling point of melted joyous over tones, I’m in the kitchen Of Hersey’s dream world, almonds to the almond joy, chips ahoy all Aboard let’s set sail to that factory beyond pleasures horizon! Oh ginger bread man run, run, as fast as you can, but just remember I’m not chasing thee old fellow, I’m too busy getting my hands caught In grannies’ old cookie jar, she after all makes the best chocolate chip Cookies ever invented, I’m still trying to get that elderly lady’s secret Recipe! Caramel covered apples are GREAT for a seasonal treat, but when I’m In celebrations festive mood, I’m looking for the sweetness of a woman’s Chose preferred, wondrous miracle first discovered by nuns whom indulged Themselves, until an evil corrupt establishment shut them down, thank God These men of the cloth saw the light at the end, right ladies! So tonight as I lay me down to sleep, I’ll know what words are to be said, Thank you for the brilliance of that cocoa bean, it is the best sinful indulgence Not listed in the ten commandments to be broken, I’m in their lord, Dreaming that chocolate dream forever, and man it’s a tasty illusionary Fantasy to behold! BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/24/2016 8:18:00 PM
I think I can say, a really DARK write!!!! :) hugs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 10:24:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:49:00 PM
Hello Cherl, I'm s glad you are back. You have so much to offer this site. Look at you, offering a delightful poem, of Chocolate dreams. ;) Belive it or not, I have chocolate dreams all the time. :) Yes, it is a tasty illusion... Miss you so much... I'm glad your hubby is doing better. I too am finding my way back here. :) love LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:01:00 PM
I do love chocolate and I enjoyed your delightful poem just as much! Nicely penned, Cheri :)
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:12:00 AM
Cherl, i love chocolates too but am in control now.. =`) I enjoyed your tremendous pen.. =`)~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:40:00 AM
What can I say, Cherl!! You are a devil in disguise, teasing us poor humans with words of delicious temptations. I usually manage to avoid gluttunous sins, but I find it hard to avoid the allure of your chocolate factory, especially the very dark variety! Well done! ** Have a nice chocolaty day:) ** Regards ... paul
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:16:00 AM
Exquisite write Cheryl...
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