Chocolate Covered Independence-Valentine's Day

Vividly, you can see that you're perfection is only natural.
Averting commercial tides, while you continue
Licking the uncooked cupcake batter off the spoon.
Excellence on its own merit, without any reused romantic tricks,
Noticing the lonely,
Tend to eat chocolate by the pounds while
Inside, their hearts swarm with bitterness
Nonetheless, all wise women should know,
Eating all your feelings never fills the emptiness
Such atrocities have "hopeless romantic" and 
Danger written all over them, hence they must stop. 
Applaud your independence and simply love
You.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rhinem Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 4:33 PM
Smile ˜ I Am listening unto the song by The Psychadelic Furs * Pretty In Pink * Isn't She ˜ I love sweeet chocate sooo of course I also love the mention of such ˜ Actually, tis a very wonderful layered in swirls of vanilla fudges poetic delights * Love, John!:) ˜
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February 10, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ Ooops, sorry for the typo my dear * "Sweeet Chocolate." :)
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:47 PM
X-celen write Alice.Happy Valentines Day to you!Do not eat all the chocolate. :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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