Chocolate Cake Bite

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Written for the contest: Short Poetry Contest, sponsored by Di11y Da11y.

Diet rabbit hole

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2023 2:14:00 PM

WOW!!! So short/sweet. Love It. Great picture. Now is it time to eat??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away................

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/9/2023 3:59:00 PM

Paula, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 5:16:00 AM

- Short... without a doubt :) ... well done :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/9/2023 3:59:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/26/2023 3:35:00 AM

Oohoo Death By Chocolate. Nice one Tania. I gained a pound looking at the picture. Chocolate cake is a fave for me only I like either cream cheese frosting or fluffy marshmallow frosting on it. Yumm. I guess a lot of chocolate cakes will be baked after reading this one. God Bless, JB

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/27/2023 1:25:00 PM

Judy, thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2023 8:36:00 AM

Yeah, you don't want to go down that rabbit hole for sure. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/23/2023 12:21:00 PM

Sara, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2023 8:09:00 AM

ha ha ha love it Tania! hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/22/2023 12:54:00 PM

Jan, thank you.