Chocolate

vv Chocolate I do love You, I do, I do, I do, I do, I eat you almost every day, I can’t live without You, no way, I don’t smoke, and I don’t drink, You just look at me from the shelves and appear to wink, Dark chocolate, milk or even white, I sink my teeth into You, and take a bite, Yet I still have managed to loose 42lbs, By not keeping You out of bounds.

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Gail Debole

Date: 8/19/2021 2:44:00 PM

Hi Pat, That's me, too...loving chocolate. That's one thing I will never give up. Dark chocolate is said to actually be a healthy treat! Enjoyed your poem. - Gail

Daver Austin

Date: 5/4/2016 2:08:00 PM

Yes, eat anything you want, just don't eat much of it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:42:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/7/2011 9:28:00 PM

So enjoyed your sweetly clever and creative poetry tonight Pat.. chocolate is yummy for the tummy and u have penned this piece so well..luv..

Brenda Atry

Date: 5/7/2011 2:04:00 PM

I read this and felt like my mom had written it. It arrived just in time for Mothers day and she wanted to touch me. Thanks ..it's a yummy treat! Brenda Atry