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Chiron of Centaurus

Chiron the wise centaur wounded and in agony was enthroned in the sky by Zeus - spared pain for being kind. Chiron half-man, half-beast had more the heart of a god - so from his own gateway of stars shines down forevermore. Written by Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2012 For nette onclaude's PEN A PENSEE Poetry Contest

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 9:48:00 AM

Hey Andrea, this is excellent, i've always loved Mythology especially Greek or Roman. but this is special, your true poetic prowess shows through here. the two last lines second stanza are gems.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/30/2012 1:02:00 AM

No wonder you won with this entry in Nette's contest. Why didn't I see this one earlier?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/21/2012 9:43:00 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win, Andrea! I love the poetic details!! :)) Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

Date: 7/20/2012 8:30:00 AM

Andrea congrats on your win in Nette's contest.Loved it!!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/18/2012 4:55:00 PM

Excellent write,Andrea.....Congratulations on your win....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2012 4:20:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2012 9:03:00 AM

gentle nudge toward that unique realm that lives inside your head, andie... sweet congrats on your win in my contest!... you are on a roll!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/18/2012 6:09:00 AM

Smashing write Andy, never heard of Chiron before. Congratulations xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2012 5:18:00 AM

congrats Andrea on this exciting write and win luv.. most interesting piece and choice of words .. a wow wonder my friend..luv

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/10/2012 3:25:00 PM

awesome cosmic poem. love phyl

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/8/2012 11:49:00 AM

A Hah! Andrea! Love it. love, Kathy

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/7/2012 10:40:00 AM

I shall have to read up on Chiron Andrea again wishes best for the contest of Nette. yours Joe.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/6/2012 11:27:00 AM

A cosmic VERSE of (part of) the uniVERSE... wonderful... a sure win... Terry (and thanks also for your kind comments)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/5/2012 6:58:00 AM

'...his own gateway of stars,' what a fabulous phrase! loved the construction, and the story... God bless, Keith :)

David Williams

Date: 7/5/2012 5:12:00 AM

Andrea, you chose the same as me, did we have the same father ha ha ha?????good luck...David

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2012 4:39:00 AM

beautiful pensee, Andrea - you really brought Chiron to life here

Kash Poet

Date: 7/5/2012 3:07:00 AM

Very nice poem on Chiron.I have to google on the costellations to write for this contest.....hahaha....best wishes to ya.....

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/4/2012 7:03:00 PM

I believe this entry might be the best one yet! I really enjoyed the descriptive nature you placed within these two Pensee's! I almost feel as if the Chiron is my friend! Gorgeous poem Andrea, I love it! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/4/2012 8:33:00 PM

hardly, my friend!!! but thanks.

Rebecca Watson

Date: 7/4/2012 4:19:00 PM

I hate poems written for contests. Its artificial and restricted. What do you want to say for your self not to "win" something?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/4/2012 8:23:00 PM

the wins are nice, but I do contest simply for the inspiration, Rebecca. I have written so many poems about myself and my life, I need new material and the contests fit my need perfectly. this one was especially hard for me to do. It's a very restrictive form, to that I agree!