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Chipped Things

I loved her chipped tooth loved it even more when she said she'd never have it fixed she was beautiful why she paid attention to me i'll never know a chipped toothed beauty briefly dancing with a manphibian three decades ago. She left this realm just before the towers fell leaving a chip in my heart that'll never be fixed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/8/2019 2:40:00 PM
Hello Anthony Slausin, yes even chipped things has great meaning to be loved. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
Like Mo below my heart fell out of my chest... I love the title and every line. "manphibian"--great word choice, so much punch in that one word. FAV
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Date: 2/17/2019 8:25:00 AM
Between smitten and haunted by this one. (turning into a poem stalker) Reminiscent for me of Irving Layton, Alden Nowlan.
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Date: 2/16/2019 11:09:00 PM
Back for more. Truly excellent poem.
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:39:00 PM
Well my heart just fell out of my chest. Powerful piece. That, is what I love about poetry. A fave. And a hug. mo
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 9/7/2023 2:19:00 AM
thank you M.M do you have a chipped tooth? L.O.L

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