Chino and Chambray

Chino and Chambray


Forty years older than I,
Charles, in his tweed cap, stands starched
in gray chino and blue chambray.
 
For more than a year his broad tie
has let the same iridescent duck
fly against a vermillion sky.
 
Like a Vatican Guard
he oversees the parking lot
I cut through each morning
 
far corner to far corner
as I cleave two triangles of cars
parked in my wake.
 
I ask him one morning,
“Charles, do you mind
when I cut through your lot?”
 
“Not at all, sir,” says Charles
as he stares straight ahead
and starts the windmill
 
of his good arm to lead
the pearl Hummer
now pulling in.

 
Donal Mahoney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 11, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Donal you've caught your wave!Very well written. As far as what to submit, submit what you wan't.I average abot four a day.some days Ionly write one and othere eleven.I write for a stress reliever and self entertainment.If my thoughts move someone else so be it.Anyway welcome to poetry soup!
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April 9, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Carol, I thank you for your advice on limiting my postings to 4 or 5 a day so other poets will have a better chance to have their poems read. Can you tell me whether this is your personal advice or the policy of Poetry Soup. I did not see any limitations on the number of submissions per day in the instructions. I'm new to this site and curious because I have not received any official message from a staffer at Poetry Soup. Good luck with your next couplet. Donal Mahoney
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April 9, 2010 at 4:23 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Donal. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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