China Town Winter

frostbitten Buddha
apprentice sweeps salty slush
cabdriver sneezes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Very clever one on China town!
Pettit Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Your few words place any reader into a clear vicarious experience.
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