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CHIMNEY SMOKE
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At first, it was just a tremor~
the way sunlight hesitated
before touching the floorboards.
Then the clocks stopped.
Not all at once, but one by one,
as if agreeing silently
to let time unravel.
Now the house breathes
in slow, uneven sighs.
The walls exhale memories~
fragments of laughter,
the ghost of a shout,
the scent of burnt toast
from a breakfast forgotten.
Outside, the wind carries
the voices of the departed.
Their laughter curls
like chimney smoke,
dissolving into cold air.
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