Chimed Upper Room

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Chimed Upper Room Chimed new day shines...eagerly corrects an upper room looks, An attic improving rapidly...promotes roams of diligence, Lacks found bordered leathered album...trapped topped a cornered desk. Cutting edge mounts an Everest...Grand Canyon grooves a pass, Emptying a corridor...grants patience traces of sweat caught brow, Weighty whatnots slothfully shift...relief of prized treasure. Lives confined--stilled in a photograph...bound neath grained-hewn film, Reviving breaths aids wiping palms...adjusting dust rules idle air, Widen pupil's gaze...proffers freedom to locked memories. A leisurely dance of fingers...entertaining a page, Courses from staging consequences...flips driftingly e'er so oft, Cherished persevered poignant times...plus occasional laughs. Age feebly trades a gentle glance...to sights of swept-up youth, Niagara Falls revisit eyes...interlude recalls Wordsworth, Rousseau swells the lulls...till Longfellow's maiden turns a page. A soothing thoroughness applied...o'er sovereignty once claimed, Delighting a soul wanting remembrance...effervescence inched rise, Bestilled processing images...icons pageants the heart. Strokes into yesterdays...fulfill a distant emptiness, Once existed in certainty...consequently in dreams of need, Now physically held...persuades rising tips of a mouth. 2020 July 30 *2nd Place* Dusty Old Memories ~~Constance La France: Judged 2020 August 06

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Date: 8/8/2020 4:24:00 AM
Oh this is fave for me William. I love how your pen colours variant streaks of splendour in the tender touch of emotions. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/8/2020 4:41:00 AM
You honor me, Aditi, with your reading of integrity and involving assessments plus ensuing accolade, Aloha! William
Date: 8/7/2020 12:38:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 8/7/2020 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, again for the opportunity and placement, also for noting my err, Aloha! William
Date: 8/7/2020 1:28:00 AM
- A lovely poem with dusty memories, William :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2020 1:33:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and accolade, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William
Date: 7/30/2020 2:07:00 PM
Well done gathering memories and bring them back to life. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:34:00 PM
Welcoming words, Eve, my thanks for the encouragement my friend, Aloha! William
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