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A Kai Michael Neumann Contest: Gift Of Revovery...2 Nov 24
Lithesome steps lead me to an ancient temple Perched across a bay, weeds and hyacinths curl between my feet, Where mist refills bowl of cotton clouds As rustling breeze ascends on skyline's ladder. In stillness, I lounge on the pew to whisper unsaid psalmic devotions for a world which aches for calmer retreat-- That I reach a peak where the mind becomes absent-- Then I hear them , a medley of peals Lifting me higher in regulated tempo from gong rhythms, A music swelling in warm temperance Until warm kiln of light and radiant fireflies stir my kundalini. On this treasured moment, a sentient energy Cleanses my beingness from past sins -- mortal and venial- That I listen to the clang of my inner child's soft echoes entering my veins: Somewhere in blank spaces, bells swing of innocent laughter...a treble, a clap bringing me to the kindness of youth, And my body stays quiet, welcoming this rite of passage on days when the spirit calls for an interlude's break...a meditative connection with the self-- without the need to speak.

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Date: 11/25/2024 9:48:00 AM
Nette, the title and content fit together seamlessly. This poem really rings home as we need to think much more about our spiritual selves and less about accumulating things that detract from a sustainable world. Take care and smiles!
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Date: 11/19/2024 1:00:00 AM
We all need 'a meditative connection with the self -- without the need to speak.' I can understand how you found this connection in an ancient temple, 'perched across the bay.' I found the same feeling of peace and calmness and connection when i visited the ancient ruins of the Acropolis, now cordoned off to the public, where the Greek Gods resided - i was transported back to my heritage. Hugs and blessings - I totally relate to this awesome write. Jennifer
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Date: 11/13/2024 8:14:00 AM
This wonderful and heartfelt. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Date: 11/12/2024 5:41:00 AM
Reading this superb piece makes me want to join you in the beautiful chime of meditation my dear poet friend and sis Nette. So refreshing and calming. I should have come here first to fave. Hugging this masterpiece and you. Thanks again and Best wishes always.
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Date: 11/11/2024 8:19:00 PM
This is so enchanting, Nette. I can smell a faint trace of incense in the air and feel the quietude settle in, intruded upon only occasionally by a gentle wind tickling the grasses... A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 11/10/2024 10:21:00 AM
weeds and hyacinths curl between my feet…oft we find a contrast, the angst of life…a lovely introspective write, Nette! Hugs
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Date: 11/8/2024 6:54:00 PM
Lovely writing, Nette! <3 I love anything with chimes....
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Date: 11/1/2024 9:10:00 PM
lovely write dear poet. reading you is to dance with a professional ballet dancer! lovely..
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away ...............
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