Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Chilly Morning

Early, chilly autumn morning
A light curtain of fog hangs low
Faint rusty colored leaves, sights bring
Through the curtain, as it lifts slow
Things are a bit hazy for now
Still waking from coffee, I walk
Knowing later will clear somehow
Then maybe I’m ready to talk
The weather changes around me
And I am ready to let go
Of nagging images I see
Replaced by this beautiful show

Heidi Sands

10/14/19

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Charlie Way October 20, 2019 at 9:06 AM Hello Heidi. Yes, the weather excerts impact on our emotions. Best wishes, Charlie Heidi Sands October 20, 2019 at 9:09 AM Hi Charlie. Thank you very much. Your comments are appreciated :)

Susan Ashley October 14, 2019 at 6:28 PM I enjoyed the way you related the early chilly morning fog to your emotions and how when the fog lifts so will your mood brighten and be able to let go of negativity.. beautifully done, Heidi. Your talent and appreciation for Nature shine in this piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 6:39 PM So happy you enjoyed this Susan. Thank you for the positive feedback and support :)

Quoth Theraven October 14, 2019 at 10:17 AM Heidi, So nice your chilly morning with coffee. I would take such a walk in the fog. -Richard Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 10:32 AM It was nice Richard and now the sun is coming out bright! The fog is gone :) It sounds like you would like the walk too. Thank you for your comment :)

Sunlite Wanter October 14, 2019 at 10:05 AM I can feel fall in your poem. We had our first chilly morning Saturday and my furnace wouldn't heat. Oh, well, it's fixed now. Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 10:11 AM Oh my Sunlite. I have one out of two broken right now as well. I am glad you were able to get one fixed. I am happy there is feeling of fall in the poem. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit October 14, 2019 at 9:02 AM A walk through a beautiful morning..have a great day, Heidi. Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 10:10 AM Yes it was Vijay. Thank you. I appreciate your kindness , always :)