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Chilly Morning

Early, chilly autumn morning A light curtain of fog hangs low Faint rusty colored leaves, sights bring Through the curtain, as it lifts slow Things are a bit hazy for now Still waking from coffee, I walk Knowing later will clear somehow Then maybe I’m ready to talk The weather changes around me And I am ready to let go Of nagging images I see Replaced by this beautiful show Heidi Sands 10/14/19

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Charlie Way

Date: 10/20/2019 9:06:00 AM

Hello Heidi. Yes, the weather excerts impact on our emotions. Best wishes, Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2019 9:09:00 AM

Hi Charlie. Thank you very much. Your comments are appreciated :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2019 6:28:00 PM

I enjoyed the way you related the early chilly morning fog to your emotions and how when the fog lifts so will your mood brighten and be able to let go of negativity.. beautifully done, Heidi. Your talent and appreciation for Nature shine in this piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2019 6:39:00 PM

So happy you enjoyed this Susan. Thank you for the positive feedback and support :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/14/2019 10:17:00 AM

Heidi, So nice your chilly morning with coffee. I would take such a walk in the fog. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2019 10:32:00 AM

It was nice Richard and now the sun is coming out bright! The fog is gone :) It sounds like you would like the walk too. Thank you for your comment :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/14/2019 10:05:00 AM

I can feel fall in your poem. We had our first chilly morning Saturday and my furnace wouldn't heat. Oh, well, it's fixed now.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2019 10:11:00 AM

Oh my Sunlite. I have one out of two broken right now as well. I am glad you were able to get one fixed. I am happy there is feeling of fall in the poem. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/14/2019 9:02:00 AM

A walk through a beautiful morning..have a great day, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2019 10:10:00 AM

Yes it was Vijay. Thank you. I appreciate your kindness , always :)